Revision and Diagnostic Analysis

Diagnose plot holes by identifying events that lack a clear preceding cause.

Diagnose character inconsistency by comparing a character's actions against their established values and fears.

Diagnose scenes without purpose by confirming each one either advances plot or develops character.

Distinguish between reader confusion (a clarity issue), boredom (a stakes issue), and disbelief (a logic issue).

Diagnose weak dialogue by identifying exchanges that lack a clear goal or subtext for each participant.

Test for thematic closure by checking if the story's ending provides a clear consequential answer to its core question.

Identify and cut prose that is stylistically pleasing but does not serve the story's function.

Distinguish between a flaw requiring a line-edit (polishing) and one requiring a full rewrite of the scene (rebuilding).