Hello! Welcome to your next lesson.
In our last session, you created the strategic blueprint for your automated welcome sequence using the "Acknowledge, Include, Mobilize" framework. You now have a clear outline detailing the purpose and key points for each of the first three emails you'll send to a new subscriber.
Today, we move from planning to practice. This lesson is dedicated to helping you write the first two emails of your welcome sequence: one to deliver the lead magnet and one to provide additional value and build connection.
These two emails are arguably the most important in your entire relationship with a subscriber. They set the tone, deliver on your promise, and determine whether your future emails get opened or ignored. Let's get them right.
1. Email #1: The Welcome & Delivery Email
This is the email your new subscriber is actively waiting for. They just gave you their email address in exchange for your lead magnet, and their interest is at its peak. Our job is to meet their expectations perfectly.
The goals for this email are:
- Deliver the goods instantly and clearly.
- Make a great first impression with a warm, personal welcome.
- Set expectations for your future relationship.
- Create an "open loop" that makes them anticipate your next email.
The following video provides an excellent, practical walkthrough of how to construct this crucial first email. It covers everything from the subject line to the powerful Postscript (P.S.).
How to Write a Welcome Email (FREE Copywriting Template)
In 'How to Write a Welcome Email', Brandon Storey breaks down the essential components of a high-performing welcome email. Pay close attention to how he structures each part to maximize engagement from the very first interaction.
Please watch the following segments: Subject Lines & Preview Text (04:00 - 09:23): Learn how to craft a subject line that guarantees your email gets opened. Notice the tip about using a 'sub-headline' or preview text. Greeting & Delivering the Lead Magnet (09:23 - 14:33): Understand the importance of introducing yourself as a person and providing the download link immediately, without making the subscriber hunt for it. The Call to Action & The P.S. (21:23 - 26:22): This section explains how to use a sign-off and, most importantly, a postscript (P.S.) to hint at the value coming in your next email, which dramatically increases the chance it gets opened.
Writing Your First Email
Let's translate those principles into your email. Below is a breakdown of each section, followed by a template.
Subject Line & Preview Text:
As the video explains, clarity is key. Don't be too clever. Combine a clear welcome with the name of your lead magnet.
- Subject:
Welcome! Your [Lead Magnet Name] is inside.orHere's your copy of [Lead Magnet Name]. - Preview Text: This is the snippet of text that appears next to the subject line in most inboxes. Use it to reinforce the benefit. E.g.,
The first step to [achieving desired outcome]...
The Body:
Follow this structure:
- Greeting & Link: Greet them and give them the link to the lead magnet right away.
- Welcome & Introduction: Welcome them to your "community" and briefly introduce yourself. This is where you start building a human connection.
- Set Expectations: Briefly tell them what kind of emails you'll be sending and why it will be valuable for them.
- Sign-off: End with your name.
- P.S. (The Open Loop): This is crucial. Give them a specific, benefit-driven reason to look for your next email.
Here are some examples of the first email from the "Lead Magnet Email Sequence Examples" resource, which follow a similar simple and direct structure.
Lead Magnet Email Sequence Examples to Use in 2024
To see these principles in action, review these simple and effective welcome email examples. Notice how they get straight to the point.
Read the section 'Email #1: Deliver the Magnet and Thank the Prospect' and then skim the three examples under the heading '3 Lead Magnet Delivery Emails for Inspiration.' Observe how they prioritize delivering the freebie.
Activity: Write Your Welcome Email
Using your outline from the last lesson and the principles we've just covered, write the first draft of your welcome email. Fill in the template below.
EMAIL #1 DRAFT
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Subject:
[Your Subject Line] -
Preview Text:
[Your Preview Text] -
Body:
Hey [Subscriber's First Name],
Thanks for signing up! As promised, here is your copy of the
[Lead Magnet Name].[Create a button or a clear link here, e.g., "Download Your Guide Now"]
My name is
[Your Name], and I'm really excited to have you here. I started[Your Website/Brand Name]because[Your one-sentence mission, e.g., I'm passionate about helping people solve X problem].Over the next few days, I'll be sharing some of my best tips to help you
[achieve the core goal related to your niche].Glad to have you with us!
All the best,
[Your Name]P.S. Keep an eye out for my next email in a day or two. I'm going to share
[Intriguing hint about Email #2, e.g., 'the #1 mistake most beginners make when...' or 'the personal story of how I finally managed to...'].
2. Email #2: The Connection & Value Email
You've delivered the lead magnet. Now it's time to build the relationship. This email is not about selling; it's about sharing, showing empathy, and making your new subscriber feel like they've joined a community, not just a mailing list. This directly corresponds to the "Include" part of the AIM framework.
The goals for this email are:
- Build trust by sharing a personal story or your mission.
- Demonstrate empathy by showing you understand their problems.
- Provide additional value beyond the lead magnet.
- Encourage engagement by asking a question.
This is your chance to show the person behind the brand and make the subscriber feel seen.
Email Marketing Tutorial: 3 Emails To Turn New Leads Into Raving Fans
In this clip from Alex Cattoni's video, she explains the purpose of the second email in the sequence: to include your prospect in your mission. This is where you move from a transactional relationship to a personal one.
Please watch the segment on 'Email #2: Include' (05:02 - 06:24). Notice the emphasis on sharing your story while still making it about the subscriber and their journey.
Writing Your Second Email
This email is often centered around a relatable story. Why are you passionate about this niche? Did you struggle with the same problem your audience is facing now? Sharing this vulnerability is a powerful way to build trust.
Subject Line:
Make it intriguing and personal.
My story with [Niche Topic]The real reason I started...Are you making this mistake too?
The Body:
- The Hook: Start by referencing their journey or the problem they're trying to solve.
- The Story: Share a brief, personal story about your own struggles or discoveries related to the niche.
- The Pivot to "You": Connect your story back to them. Frame your experience as a way of understanding their current situation.
- The Call to Engagement: End by asking a simple question. When a subscriber replies, it signals to email providers (like Gmail) that your emails are valuable, which improves your overall deliverability.
This example of a second email shows how to check in and provide an extra tip, which is a great way to add value.
Lead Magnet Email Sequence Examples to Use in 2024
This resource provides a template for the second email in a sequence. It focuses on checking in with the prospect and offering another helpful tip, reinforcing your role as a helpful guide.
Read the section 'Email #2: Check up on the Prospect.' Note how the email isn't selling anything, but rather continuing the conversation and offering more help.
Activity: Write Your Connection Email
Now, use your outline and the concepts above to draft your second email.
EMAIL #2 DRAFT
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Subject:
[Your Intriguing, Personal Subject Line] -
Body:
Hi [Subscriber's First Name],
I hope you're enjoying the
[Lead Magnet Name].When I first started
[activity related to your niche], I constantly struggled with[the specific problem your audience faces]. I spent months[describe your fruitless efforts]and honestly felt like giving up.It wasn't until I discovered
[the key insight or 'aha' moment]that things finally started to click. It made me realize that[the core lesson you learned].I'm sharing this because I see so many people getting stuck where I was, and I want you to know you're not alone and that it's possible to get past it.
In fact, that's my main goal here—to help you avoid the mistakes I made.
So, let me ask you: what's the #1 thing you're struggling with right now when it comes to
[your niche topic]?Just hit 'reply' and let me know. I read and respond to every email personally.
Cheers,
[Your Name]
Conclusion
Congratulations! You have now drafted the two most critical emails for welcoming new subscribers. These emails work together to deliver on your promise, establish your authority, and, most importantly, build a foundation of trust. By being personal and providing value upfront, you earn the right to introduce an offer later.

Key Takeaways:
- Email #1 (Acknowledge & Deliver): Prioritize clarity and speed. Deliver the lead magnet immediately and use a P.S. to create an "open loop" for your next email.
- Email #2 (Include & Connect): Focus on building rapport. Share a personal story, show empathy, and encourage a reply to start a two-way conversation.
- Tone is everything: Write as if you are emailing a single friend. Keep it conversational, helpful, and authentic.
Preview of the next lesson:
Your website is up, your legal pages are in place, and you now have a system to capture and nurture leads. The next big piece of the puzzle is getting people to your website in the first place. In our next module, we will dive into Search Engine Optimization (SEO), the art and science of getting free, targeted traffic from search engines like Google.